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First Lines Contest 2017: Diablo

Max HawthorneMax Hawthorne   November 24, 2016   `
Category: Fiction / Short Stories
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First Lines Contest 2017: Diablo
There is no greater test of vision than to foresee one’s own death. Reminiscent of a Rodin sculpture come to life, Artek sat motionless on the hot sand, his back pressed against the rough-but-reassuring bark of a tall palm tree. High overhead, the sun shone down with unusual fierceness, and he was grateful for the limited shade.

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Pre-cursor for the best marine terror.

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Great opening line - the first step on a primeval adventure.

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