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First Lines Contest 2017: Talon, Encounter

Gisela SedlmayerGisela Sedlmayer   November 25, 2016   `
Category: Fiction / Young Adult
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3rd Place 2017
First Lines Contest 2017: Talon, Encounter
'No, no, no!' Matica screamed out from the time they had seen it. She had hoped not to see it so early, especially while laying on Talon and trying to fly home. 'It can't be. Not so early. Not now.'

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Talon is incomparable. A great work.

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This book is awesome! Gigi has a great talent telling her story.

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Thank you so much Leyla.

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