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First Lines Contest 2017: Earth Sentinels

Elizabeth HerreraElizabeth Herrera   December 21, 2016   `
Category: Fiction / Fantasy
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First Lines Contest 2017: Earth Sentinels
A fallen angel with raven-black hair waved his hand over a crystal ball. The swirling blue mist inside dissipated, revealing the earth slowly spinning. With piercing blue eyes, he somberly observed the world being destroyed by mankind’s greed, corruption and indifference, knowing that without intervention the earth’s inhabitants would cease to exist, leaving him alone in this godforsaken place.

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Love the writing!

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First line had me hooked...

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My favorite Book ever!! Great adventure tale with a message!!

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