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First Lines Contest 2017: When is My Forever

Aileen Friedman   December 29, 2016   `
Category: Fiction / Christian
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2017 Finalist
When is My Forever
Driving past the pick-up-and-go for the fifth time, I was quickly losing my patience. Dena, my mother, was supposed to have been there waiting for me. According to the person who had answered the phone at the information desk, her flight had landed forty-five minutes ago – yet there was still no sign of her.

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I feel the tesnsion

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Awesome, book. Loved it

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Great story

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Great start!

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