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First Lines Contest 2017: Veil of Darkness

T.C. Metivier January 01, 2017
First Lines Contest 2017: Veil of Darkness
On the planet Tellaria, night loomed over the island of Proth and over the single military tower that rose like a silver claw above the jagged, rocky landscape. The wind howled, its fury shaking the few skeletal trees that tenaciously gripped the island's barren soil.. Sirens blared through the gloom, and a horde of black-clad commandos swarmed through the tower doors, disgorged from the hulking military flitters that ringed the tower's base.
On the planet Tellaria, night loomed over the island of Proth and over the single military tower that rose like a silver claw above the jagged, rocky landscape. The wind howled, its fury shaking the few skeletal trees that tenaciously gripped the island's barren soil.. Sirens blared through the gloom, and a horde of black-clad commandos swarmed through the tower doors, disgorged from the hulking military flitters that ringed the tower's base.

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