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First Lines Contest 2018: Love Doesn't Love Me

Randy Coxton   October 10, 2017   `
Category: Fiction / African American
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First Lines Contest 2018: Love Doesn't Love Me
Yandy lay there bleeding from the head wound she received from a gunshot. As her life started to leave her body she thought about everything she had done to Alexandria and all the people she had hurt in the past. “Damn maybe I shouldn’t have fuck, she thought to herself. She had no family because everyone that she knew she either screwed them or put them in the dirt house by taking from them and never seeing them again.
Her own mother disowned her because she slept with her step father Mack, now she had fucked over her best friend. As the reality sat in that death was inevitable. She never meant to hurt Alexandria she but Colin had caught her at a vulnerable time. She had met Colin before she had Alexandria but it was still no reason to betray a friend she thought as smoke filled the house.
Yandy laughed a little to herself as she thought about what was going to happen next. She knew that she might not live to see another day but living was worth it or so she thought.

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