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First Lines Contest 2018: Jacks Dits

Paul White   October 31, 2017   `
Category: Fiction / Humorous
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First Lines Contest 2018: Jacks Dits
Watching a program on television, involving Custom and Excise, had me reminiscing about returning to the UK after a 9-month deployment.
There was, as usual when returning home, an underlying atmosphere of excitement permeating throughout the whole ship.
Many of the married men wore an expression of worry on their faces, as they queued outside of the sickbay, praying their final small arms inspection was given the all clear.

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