A plethora of adverbs, adjectives, gerunds & so forth.
Which one of these descriptive passages do you find easier to read? Which flows better? Totally terrified, she ran through the forest of trees, her heart thudding loudly in her chest. Tripping and stumbling, she staggered onward, totally exhausted. Filled with terror, she ran through the forest; her heart thudded in her chest. Tree roots […]