Developing the Setting for your Novel
This post is the sixth in a series about writing a novel. You can check out the list of past topics at the end of this post.
In my series, I recently listed three aspects of your story that you need to develop before writing – characters, setting and plot. The past two weeks have covered characters so today I will address setting.
The setting is the location where the events of a story or scene take place. This could be New York, a National forest, a pool hall, the White House, in space, on another world or any of a million different places.
Every situation, every story is different and will have different setting demands. Some stories only work in a fictional setting (think Lord of the Rings, the Wizard of Oz, Star Wars). And some benefit from real-world settings. And then there are some – such as romance – that could work in either location.
Real vs. Fictional Settings
Real Setting – In this case you are setting your story in a real place such as Las Vegas or London.
Pros –There is typically less research when using a real location as your setting. This is especially true if you write about a place you know well. You know how it smells, how the morning air feels, how the people move and talk. You will know the layout of the city. You won’t have to research the setting as you already know it, and hopefully that knowledge will come out in your writing. Readers already know some of these places so you can spend less time establishing your setting. When you mention the Manhattan skyline or the Washington monument, people will know what you are talking about. The history, folklore and local stories can be woven into your story and give it authenticity.
Cons –You have to know the place you are writing about well especially if it is a popular place like New York or Las Vegas. If you get something wrong about where something is located, or how long it takes to travel from one place to another, then those readers who know this place will be irritated, and these inaccuracies will chip away at your novel’s authenticity. If you are writing about a well-known real place, no amount of research on the Internet will replace actually going to the location. Using a real place in a fantasy setting can actually sometimes make it harder for the reader to believe what is happening. They doubt things that contradict what they believe to be true. In this case, a pure fantasy world actually might work better.
Fictional Setting – This means setting your story in a place that does not exist. You will need to develop enough information to make your reader believe that this is a “real” place.
Pros –You get to create a whole new city/country/world. Everything is the way you want it. You pick customs, government, the local law enforcement, where the hospital is located as well as where the forests, mountains and beaches are located. (For tips on naming places in your fantasy novel, click here.) If you are creating your own world, no one can tell you that your society is wrong. It is your creation and yours alone. If you want two moons or for people to live in pods, it is all up to your imagination.
Cons –Creating your own city or world can be time consuming. You are starting with a blank canvas, and you need to fully develop your setting for your characters to work and live in it. The type of city or world you create will determine the reactions and behavior of your characters. There is no immediate connection with your reader. When you mention the Las Vegas strip or the Grand Canyon, readers can visualize the place. In your fictional world, you will need to add more descriptions to make this place come alive for the reader and be believable.
And no one said you can’t do a little of both. You can set your novel in a real city but have your protagonist live on a fictional street or subdivision. Or you can start in a real place like London and ended up at a fictional magical school. You just need to pick a setting in whatever location will work best for your story.
If you need more help deciding on your setting, check out this post on 9 Questions to Consider When Choosing your Novel’s Setting.