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Row your boat

This excerpt from XAGHRA’S REVENGE illustrates the actual movement of the rowers on galleys in the 16th century. Contrary to what you might see in movies of galley slaves rowing while always sitting down, they stood for part of the cycle. It makes sense. For one thing there was less friction on the benches so their posteriors didn’t get so raw, sore. Also they use gravity better. It has to be remembered too that the oars, while heavy, were finely balanced on the divots so not as heavy to row, especially when there were three men per oar.

This section from Chapter 35 is just before our captured Gozo farmer makes a bid to escape over the side.
The drummer started the usual rhythm.
Push down, stand, forward, lift, back and sit.
Push down, stand, forward, lift, back and sit.
Push down, stand, forward, lift, back and sit.
Stjepan wore a maniacal grimace. Muscles screamed but energy surged, fuelled by hatred.
Push down, stand, forward, lift, back and sit.
Stjepan sailed through the pain, enjoying the rush. The pull and stand hurt, but that was sweet. The push hurt more–exquisitely so.
Push. Dragut, Push. Lurgus. Push for Sabid. Push for Lidia.
After an hour, Lurgus collapsed just as Stjepan had to stand. He stamped on the Greek’s neck, and heard bones crunch. Many other rowers, too exhausted to cry out, stayed sitting. The oars entangled. The drum master stopped beating and the horn blasted to signal up oars. Stjepan saw only three oars reach vertical. He didn’t bother with his, in pretence of attending Lurgus, who laid face down in the crud. If he hadn’t already died from exhaustion or a broken neck, he’d have suffocated. Stjepan’s elbow on the back of the sweat-laced bald head saw to that.

The link below is for the Kindle. Free on Kindle Unlimited, the price of a coffee and cake otherwise. The paperback is on Amazon too.

http://myBook.to/Xaghra

As usual I am in some trouble. One of the alternative cover images was created by John Keane, a fellow writer in the British Science Fiction Association critique group. It is rather racy as you see, and for this some folk say I’m sexist. However, many young women were enslaved from Gozo and taken to seraglios in Constantinople. Many endured their sex lives there and a few escaped. Part of the revenge in the title is for Lidia, when she tries to escape with a friend.

 

 

 

 

 

A list of my publications in this last 17 years

2003 first short of the decade was called 2020 Vision (ironic)

2003-05 ESCAPING REALITY: a humorous thriller http://hyperurl.co/nyjaiv

2005-08 EXIT, PURSUED BY A BEE: sci fi  http://hyperurl.co/du4s3h

2009  HOT AIR: literary thriller  http://hyperurl.co/di4y0h

2009-12 ARIA LEFT LUGGAGE: sci fi pandemic apocalypse http://smarturl.it/1fexhs

2013 ARIA RETURNING LEFT LUGGAGE http://hyperurl.co/tgtid6

2014 ARIA ABANDON LUGGAGE http://hyperurl.co/26trxv

2014-17 XAGHRA’S REVENGE http://myBook.to/Xaghra

2018 INCREMENTAL: 25 short, surreal stories http://mybook.to/Incremental

2019 SUPPOSE WE: scifi https://mybook.to/SupposeWe

2019 FALLING UP: scifi  https://mybook.to/FallingUP

 

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